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  • Jarrow Cross C of E Primary School
‘Living and Learning’
Value in Everyone


Today, you are going to complete your descriptive piece of writing.


Using your ideas from yesterday’s lesson, you will be writing a paragraph that describes the explosion.


Remember to include:

  • Similes
  • Metaphors
  • Personification
  • Good description

It would also be a good idea to include some of your senses. What can you see, taste, smell, hear and touch?

Really try hard to use ambitious vocabulary – you could up-level your vocabulary by using synonyms (words that means the same as another word)

For example: instead of using sad you could say despondent.


You can look back at chapter 1 to help you and you can also look back at the image.


You can either type your work onto a word document or write it in your exercise book.